Green

I need opinions. I just made a rough version of a new song I wrote, called Green. One version is solo, the other has the vocals doubled. I’m not sure which one I like better. Help me. Keep in mind also that I will be re-recording this (with stuff to fill in the instrumental break), so the levels will be mo’ better balanced and the doubled vocals mo’ better matching.

Green (potted)

Green (grafted)

Green
Come along with me
Climb the family tree
Kiss the bumblebee
And make me yours
All around us the sky is blooming red

Don’t you hear me now
Balance on the bough
Let’s not wast this row
And make sweet love
All around us the clouds are breaking up
What a night to find us making up

Something’s happening here
When I kiss you ear
Returned another year
Our green love
All around us the people build their towns
Still our sighing is the only sound